is this picture good if you think this is good or bad you can write on the comments this i draw for my sister aida

Zoo in Doha-Qatar

today i go to the zoo with my family in there i see any kind of animal like elephant,tiger,hippo,bear,monkey,fox and bat etc . in there i am so happy my favorite animal is bird and cat. after we see all the kind of animal we go to the park that near the playground then i play until the train come . so i wait with my family, then the train come so we run to the train we have to pay 19 for 5 family . so we go around the zoo with train then after , we really tired so we buy an ice cream i choose strawberry with vanilla and chocolate i and my father choose the same my sister alma and aida they choose orange mango with melon. but my mother didn't want it . after finish eating so we go home .

fighting

today (19-02-09) in this evening i go to the park with my sister to play and i meet with my friend there. i want to play swing with my friend . but there was a big boy with his brother also want to play, we was first on the swing but that boy not allowed us to play that swing because that is their swing . but we are not scared we say "we are first so you have to looking for another swing". but they didn't want it . and we didn't want to go and we just stay there and play. then they throw us with the sands so i do it back, then they throw it again and again so i really angry they run away but i will never let them go i run to catch his brother and my friend help me to catch his big brother . when that boy i catch i beat him and he beat me too ,he say that "Indonesian is poor" so i say" Indonesian are not poor they are brave" .then my father come to that boy, but his big brother is run away. so only that boy my father say to him "be a good boy! " he shouted .
then i go home with my father .

tommy and timmy

tommy is a naughty boy and timmy is a good boy they both are brother, they school in the same school they are class 2 . one day when they are school the teacher give them The test, and tommy didn't learn but timmy learn every day. so tommy ask his brother (timmy) "give me the answer of question number 1",timmy answer "no i can't ,it mean you are cheating from me , you have to learn ." then when the bell ring they all give the test to the teacher. and tommy looking for his brother , when they meet "hey timmy why you dont want to show me the test " said tommy angrily , so his brother said "i can't, mom say we can't cheat we must learn every test what the teacher say, if you want i will teach you so that you can do every test". but tommy didn't want . "time to go home " the teacher say. the next morning when they go to the school , teacher give the paper test , tommy get D marks and timmy get A++. so timmy so happy but tommy not . the teacher say to tommy"tommy you have to learn , so you can got good marks like timmy", "ok teacher "tommy said". the bell is ring now is time for playing time. then timmy sit down with tommy near the swings . "wats up tommy, can i help you ", "of course i need help i get bad marks, i feel sory i didn't listen you , can you give me one chance i will be good and learning every day ok", "ok" . now tommy start learning with timmy every day .
and then teacher give the next test , and tommy and timmy do the test very easily they so happy. when the next day teacher give the paper test timmy tommy get A++. tommy say "thanks you my brother you are the best ,you are right we have to learn to make us clever","your welcome my brother, learning never boring now for us ". and now they are success for ever.

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my friend in qatar

i have so much friend the name is mila,fitri,seroja,zahwa,aliya,naswa&kak dinda. they all my friend we always play together my friend seroja she like singing her sound is so good ,and mila she is so cute and funny .
everyday we play hide and seek , racing ,ghost and ghost & indonesian game benteng. if you all are here we can play together .

bye...bye...bye..